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2013-08-26 06:21:39| 分类：学诗词 | 标签： |举报 |字号大中小订阅

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天气秋来寂，清悠月上窗。

倚栏凭远眺，思恋泪心霜。

五绝仄起（首句不入韵）
-----规则-----
⊙仄平平仄
平平⊙仄平（韵）
⊙平平仄仄
⊙仄仄平平（韵）
------------ (蓝字应平，红字应仄) --------------
天气秋来寂
清悠月上窗【窗：十唐】押韵
倚栏凭远眺
思恋泪心霜【霜：十唐】押韵
--------------------检测结果(中华新韵)----------------------
平仄非常完美！(本程序暂不能判断拗救

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    秋来天气寂，
       夜静月临窗，
      闭目情丝远，
        菊开叶上霜。

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